Chapter 4
Medicine
in the 1800s was a hodgepodge of techniques, both good and disastrous. It was
the turning point within medical history, on the cusp of scientific innovation.
Medical practitioners were often teetering on that very same ledge; performing
complicated biomechanical surgeries one day and phlebotomy the next. Where the
line was drawn between superstition and science is unknown.
--excerpt from museum pamphlet entitled Medicine Through the Ages
Haeju
Weekly Press
Sunday,
7:12am, March 20th, 1858
Everything hurt, but he couldn’t
feel the pain. He knew it was there, that his entire body throbbed, but all he
felt was a dizziness that made him want to vomit. His throat was dry, tongue
sticking to the roof of his mouth, and he coughed as he slowly opened his eyes.
The light stung so he closed them
again but the throbbing in his body intensified in the dark—he could feel it now—and he found himself staring
groggily up at a wooden ceiling. Where was he?
He should be dead, shouldn’t he? The
horse…and then Afflicted. The Afflicted! He tried to sit up but a firm hand
shot out from his left and pressed him gently back down. Baekhyun didn’t know
who this person was, with their wild curls and a cheerful smile plastered to
his face. “You’re awake.”
Baekhyun blinked again and shifted
on the bed, only to illicit a frown from the man now looming over him. “Hey, I
was told not to let you move. Doctor’s orders.” His voice was deep, it didn’t
fit him. And it was too loud. At least, it felt
loud, like he’d cupped his hands to Baekhyun’s ear and begun yelling in them.
He was going to vomit. “Where am I?”
He managed to bite out, “How did I get here?” This didn’t look like a surgeon’s
office or a hospital.
“Your
friends brought you.” The man sat back in a chair that had been pulled
alongside the bed. It creaked, and the sound echoed behind Baekhyun’s eyelids.
“Friends?”
He didn’t have friends.
“The two
Chinese guys. They’re with Jongdae right now.”
Two Chinese…he was beginning to
remember. Someone had grabbed him before he’d fallen completely. The two
brothers. They’d saved him? Why? And why did it matter? He’d never be able to
walk again. He looked down at his legs and his brow furrowed.
He still had two legs. “…how…?” He
croaked out, ending in a coughing fit.
The man beside him hurriedly grabbed
for a glass of water on the side table. He propped Baekhyun up and lifted the
cup to his lips, looking worried. “How what?”
“My leg.”
“What about it?” The other man
didn’t seem to understand what Baekhyun was asking. “Kyungsoo fixed it.”
Fixed it? You couldn’t fix something
like that.
“Well, he replaced it.” The other
man recanted, “He couldn’t save your knee so he rebuilt it.” He held up his
hands with a bright smile, “but don’t worry, Kyungsoo is a good doctor. Your
leg will be good as new. You won’t be able to tell the difference.”
Baekhyun
scoffed. His leg was swollen, wrapped under what felt like miles of linen and
salve. He didn’t understand how he’d be able to walk again, not like this. And
what did he mean rebuilt? How could you rebuild something like that? How was he
going to pay for it? He didn’t have money to pay a doctor. He couldn’t afford
his own mother’s medicine, how would he be able to pay for a new knee?
“Kyungsoo
said that in a week or so we can start getting you up and practice walking with
your new kneecap.” The other man held out his hand to shake, “I’m Park
Chanyeol, by the way.”
“…Byun
Baekhyun.” He didn’t take the hand
offered him. He turned his head and glanced around the room. It was well-built
and although sparsely furnished the furniture looked well made. “Where am I?”
“Haeju
Weekly Press!” Chanyeol said proudly, still grinning like an idiot.
Haeju
Weekly Press…the name sounded vaguely familiar. Baekhyun couldn’t afford
newspapers and he couldn’t read, so he’d never paid attention to the names. But
that one was one he’d definitely heard before. Ah, that’s right, they’d run a
story on the illegal smuggling of firearms by the local constable.
But the
real question became why he was at a newspaper office in the first place? It
didn’t seem like a likely place for a doctor to be, and even less likely for
the two Chinese men to know anyone here.
The door opened and a young man with wide eyes
walked into the room, rolling up his sleeves as he went. He paused upon seeing
Baekhyun awake and then looked to Chanyeol, “What are you doing in here?”
Chanyeol
scratched the back of his head with a sheepish smile. “I wanted to check up on
him.”
Kyungsoo
gave a small smile before he turned to Baekhyun. “I’m doctor Do Kyungsoo, the
doctor who performed your surgery. How are you feeling?”
Baekhyun
swallowed, “…nauseous.” And panicked. More than a little panicked. He couldn’t
afford this. What was going to happen now?
Kyungsoo
gave him a sympathetic, knowing look before he pulled back the blankets. “That’s
to be expected. The medication I gave you to dull the pain was very strong but
it makes you feel out of sorts for a while.” He glanced at the bandages
surrounding Baekhyun’s leg before he reached into his bag—Baekhyun hadn’t even
seen him bring it in, the pain medication must have been very strong—and pulled out a pair of scissors. “I need to check to
see how your leg is doing.”
Baekhyun
gave a weak nod and tried not to flinch away when the doctor began cutting
through the bandages. He tensed and his leg muscles twitched, sending a sharp
pain up his body that made him hiss.
Kyungsoo
began to peel away the bandages before he caught Baekhyun’s eye and gave
another reassuring smile. “It’s going to look bad because the skin hasn’t
healed completely. Don’t get discouraged.”
Bad was not
the word that Baekhyun would have used to describe his leg. Horrific was a more
fitting term. The skin from his thigh to his calf was a mosaic of purple and jaundiced
yellow, and it was covered in a thin whitish coating that he supposed was some kind
of salve. It had dried in some places, turning into a chalky powder. In others
it had clotted atop his skin like curdled milk. It smelled like it looked, and
his nauseous returned tenfold. He gripped the edge of the mattress to steady
himself.
Where his knee should have been
there was a series of interlocking bent, metal plates. He could see the edges
of wires before they disappeared behind swollen, bruised skin. It felt almost
like his knee was vibrating—a soft hum, like the buzzing of a wasp.
“Once the
swelling goes down I’ll be able to check the wires.” Kyungsoo had placed a
delicate hand atop the device, his other hand touching the inside of Baekhyun’s
thigh as he stared with a thoughtful frown, head cocked to one side. “You’re
healing up quite nicely. There is no sign of infection and your body has taken
to the circuitry well. I’ll give you another shot of penicillin and some laudanum
to dull the pain before I redress the bandage.”
“I can’t pay. I don’t have any
money.” Baekhyun bit out.
Kyungsoo
blinked. “Alright.” He went back to his medical bag and pulled out a small box,
which he opened and began fiddling with.
Baekhyun
stared. “That’s it?” That couldn’t be it. He’d been given a new knee—and medicine.
Medicine was expensive, especially penicillin. He’d heard about that before—it was
a new; it was said that it could cure everything. It must have cost a fortune!
Kyungsoo had
pulled out a needle from the small box and a bottle with words in English
stamped across the label. “I willingly took on the surgery myself, so any costs
for the treatment are mine.”
Bullshit, Baekhyun wanted to yell. Only
rich people could afford to pay for this kind of thing and the rich never did
anything out of the goodness of their hearts, especially not for someone like
him. There had to be some hidden agenda.
“The skin
is tender so this might hurt.” Kyungsoo warned as he placed his hand on
Baekhyun’s leg before pressing the needle against the skin. It did hurt. Chanyeol had to grab his leg
to keep him from injuring himself as Kyungsoo nearly lost his grip on the
needle. It felt like Kyungsoo had injected liquid fire under his skin. It
crawled up his thigh and into his abdomen.
“Alright,
you can let go now Chanyeol.” Kyungsoo answered softly and he placed the needle
down beside the box it had come in. He looked to Baekhyun, “I can give you the
next shot in your arm, so don’t worry.”
Baekhyun
swallowed back a retort. He wasn’t scared
it just hurt like hell!
“This salve
is something I made myself,” Kyungsoo continued, pulling out a jar of what
looked like slime. “It helps with the electric circulation and keeps down the
swelling around the mechanic joints.” He made a face, “It smells horrible
though.”
So that was
what he’d smelled. Before he’d thought his leg was rotting off. He knew what
flesh rot smelled like and it had been eerily similar. Kyungsoo unscrewed the
lid and Chanyeol groaned, pulling his shirt collar up to cover his nose.
Baekhyun pressed his sleeve against his face—only then realizing that he was
wearing some kind of cotton shift and not his hanbok.
Kyungsoo didn’t
seem bothered by it. The only indication he smelled it at all was a brief wrinkling
of his nose before he scooped out a handful of the stuff and placed it on Baekhyun’s
knee. It was cold, like a night in the middle of winter without a fire, and he
shivered unconsciously.
“Chanyeol,
can you help me lift his leg? I need to wrap it.” Kyungsoo had already
finished, wiping his hands on a towel from the end table. “We’ll try and make
this as painless as possible.”
That was no
reassuring.
By the time
Kyungsoo finished wrapping his leg and had given him a shot of laudanum he was
near delirious with pain. Chanyeol pressed a cup of water to his lips and he
drank greedily.
Kyungsoo
and Chanyeol spoke for a moment but Baekhyun didn’t catch what they said before
the door closed and Kyungsoo had left. Baekhyun blinked wearily, trying to stay
conscious.
“Kyungsoo
went to get us some food. You’ve only had some broth we spoon fed you while you
were unconscious. Kyungsoo says you need to eat well if you’re going to get
better.” Chanyeol helped prop Baekhyun up with pillows, grinning brightly, as
if he hadn’t just seen the horror that was Baekhyun’s leg.
“I really
can’t pay.” Baekhyun reiterated.
Chanyeol shrugged. “Kyungsoo has
enough money. He’s pretty rich.” Baekhyun recalled Kyungsoo’s clothes and
supposed that was true enough. He’d dressed like a British noble—or at least
how Baekhyun expected a British noble to dress.
He
remembered what Chanyeol said about food and only then realized how hungry he
was. Unfortunately he wasn’t sure he could keep anything down, not with the
smell of that disgusting poultice floating through the room.
Haeju
Weekly Press
Sunday, 9:10am,
March 20th, 1858
The water was hot, almost scalding.
Yixing hadn’t had a hot bath since they’d left China. He wanted to sit in the
tub and soak and never get out, except that the tub was terribly crowded with
his leggy brother scrunched into the other side.
At first,
Yixing had suggested taking separate baths but Zitao had pointed out that hot
water was expensive and they didn’t know if they were going to be charged for
it. It had taken much coaxing for Yixing to get him to take the hot bath at
all.
They had no
money and no job prospects. Even now, Yixing was certain that they were going
to be thrown out of the house. Now that Jongdae knew they didn’t have any money
to repay his kindness he would certainly send them on their way.
Zitao’s
knee bumped against his own as he reached for the bar of soap his brother held.
“If we
can’t pay they’ll send us to debtor’s prison.” Yixing scrubbed his arm
furiously, watching the skin redden.
“Tonight we
should leave.” Zitao whispered. They had overstayed their welcome, he was
certain. Jongdae hadn’t questioned them on what they were going to do and he’d
allowed them to stay in his home for three days now. It didn’t make sense and
Zitao knew that Jongdae’s kindness would come to an end soon. Besides, the
other man had woken them up that morning and told them to take a bath and then
come downstairs to discuss what they were going to do next.
It was
time.
“Where will
we go? We can’t run away. That’s against the law.” Yixing looked at his younger
brother in confusion.
“…I don’t
want to die here.” Zitao swallowed, voice cracking. “I want to go home.”
“…Zitao…”
“Gege, what
are we going to do?” Zitao had meant it when he’d said he had no intentions of
returning to the railroad company, especially now that they knew they’d been
cheated completely. But the reality of what he’d said had finally sunk in. They
had nothing to their name, they would starve to death or worse, die of some
horrid disease in the cramped debtor’s prison if Jongdae turned them in. They
had to run away to survive. Perhaps they could find work somewhere else…there
HAD to be somewhere else.
His hand
shook, and his brother noticed—Yixing always noticed—and he laced his fingers
with his own and rested their foreheads together. “Xiǎodì, I will protect you.”
“Who is
going to protect you?” Zitao asked
brokenly.
Yixing
didn’t answer. He unhooked their fingers and climbed out of the tub. He glanced
at the clothing that Jongdae had given them to wear. Western clothes. Would
they have to pay for those as well?
He heard
water splashing behind him and knew that Zitao had gotten out of the bath as
well. He reached for a towel and began drying his hair.
Jongdae and
the doctor were sitting at the table when they came in from the bathhouse,
fully clothed and entirely uncomfortable. The doctor looked slightly better
than the last time they’d seen him, falling asleep at the table after a night
of surgery. He’d been busy the past few days checking up on the injured boy and
making house calls. They’d barely seen him.
“Ah, here they are.” Jongdae gave
the two a crooked smile. “Come and join us for breakfast.”
The two sat silently at the table,
heads down. This would probably by their last meal here. They were about to be
told to leave. No one was nice enough to let three people live in their house
without payment. Perhaps they’d let the Korean boy stay because he was injured
but the other two were perfectly healthy.
“There will be more job
opportunities in Hanseong.” Kyungsoo stirred his tea. “I’m planning on buying
property as well. I’ll need someone to help with the upkeep and moving. That
would give them something to do for a while until they found a job.”
He was too nice. Jongdae watched
Kyungsoo and wondered if people like him could really exist. He waited for the
two Chinese men to respond until he remembered that they didn’t speak Korean
and therefore had no idea what Kyungsoo had just said.
“How soon would they need to move?”
Jongdae asked the doctor. He realized that although Zitao and Yixing did not
understand what was being said they were paying rapt attention.
Kyungsoo shrugged. “I’ll need to
find a house first. I have my own quarters at the University but I would need
to find alternative housing for them if they came with me right away. Besides
that the tracks aren’t complete.”
“So they’ll be here awhile?”
“If you need money to house them…”
Kyungsoo began, but Jongdae waved him off, “I’m more worried about the police
barging in and executing us all for fear of infection. It isn’t safe here for
them.”
Kyungsoo sighed, even as he began
piling food atop a silver tea tray. He’d been worried about that as well. When
he’d gone out for house calls he’d listened or any news of the incident. No one
had heard anything, and that was what shocked him. Had the men at the gate not
said anything for fear of getting in trouble?
“What are you doing, by the way?”
Jongdae asked, looking over the food that Kyungsoo had amassed.
“Chanyeol and Baekhyun-ssi haven’t
eaten yet. I thought I’d bring them up some food after their stomachs settled.”
Kyungsoo motioned toward the tray. “Would you ask them about Hanseong?”
Kyungsoo smiled at the two Chinese boys before heading up the stairs, tray in
hand.
Jongdae
nodded, watching the doctor leave. It couldn’t be possible. He couldn’t figure
Do Kyungsoo out and that bothered him. Jongdae liked to know what he was
dealing with. There wasn’t such a thing as inherently good people, he knew
that. So what was Do Kyungsoo?
He’d think
about it later, mull it over with a cup of brandy. Right now he had his two
Chinese men to deal with. How on earth had he agreed to house all of these
people? He felt like the owner of an orphanage, not a newspaper editor. He
shook his head before turning to Zitao and Yixing. “Are you two attached to
Haeju?”
Yixing felt
his stomach drop. Was that his way of saying they were going to send them back
to China? No. No they couldn’t go back there. They’d die if they went back. He
remained silent. His throat had constricted painfully.
“We’re not
going back to China.” Zitao whispered, almost fearfully, as if waiting for
Jongdae to begin yelling. It really surprised Yixing sometimes, how his brother
could go from fearless to fearful so quickly.
Jongdae
blinked, and slowly a smile spread across his face. It was a crooked smile, but
not unkind. “I never said you were. I was talking about Hanseong.”
“…Joseon’s
capital?”
Jongdae
gave a curt nod. “The doctor is heading to Hanseong once the trains are up and running.
He is buying some property in the city and needs someone to maintain it for
him. He offered you the job until you find other accommodations in the city.”
A…job…? Had
he heard correctly? They weren’t kicking them out they were…giving them jobs?
Yixing’s usual stoic mask fell, brow furrowing. He looked to his brother. Zitao
looked like he hadn’t understood what was said. Their eyes met and Zitao shook
his head. This was a trap. It wasn’t real. Something had to be wrong.
“He said it
would be basic things like moving equipment and cleaning the house while he was
out. Of course you won’t be able to move in right away. He has to go and buy a
home first and then he’ll send for you.” Jongdae continued as if he hadn’t seen
the looks of disbelief etched on the brothers’ faces. “…well?”
“What would
we do before then?” Yixing asked calmly, feeling anything but. “You said he won’t
have a house right away. We would have to wait somewhere.” That was the catch,
wasn’t it? They’d be kicked out before then and they’d die before they had a
chance to take the doctor up on his offer. They were being cheated again.
Jongdae bit
his bottom lip, “Well, I have room here, for the time being. You can pay for
your board by running errands for me. After all, meals aren’t free.”
No, no they
weren’t, and that was why none of this made sense. Running errands to pay for
room and board? That didn’t add up. But they had no other options. Under the
table his brother sought his hand and gripped it tightly. He was shaking. That’s
right, he had to take care of Zitao. He’d promised to protect him. “…can we
think it over?”
“Of course,
no hurry.” Jongdae grabbed for a roll. “But I am going to ask you to do a
little job for me in exchange for those clothes, if that’s alright.” He
motioned to the ones they were wearing with his butter knife.
Zitao and
Yixing exchanged glances. “…what kind of job?”
Jongdae’s
grin stretched.
Baggerby
and Green Railroad Company
Sunday, 2am,
March 27th, 1858
Wu
Fan found himself awake and staring at his ceiling. He glanced at the clock on
the wall in the half light. 2am. He sighed and turned on his side. This had
become a common occurrence ever since he’d come back from the Deadlands.
If
he slept, all he saw was shadowed eyes staring at him with uncontrolled hatred.
Two days before new immigrants had arrived. He’d met tem at the docks and he’d
looked at all of them in hopes of a familiar face and it had struck him that he
was an idiot. They were dead. He had left Zhang Zitao and his brother in the
Deadlands and they would never come back.
There
had been a rumor. A city guard had told a drunken tale of two Chinese survivors
that had managed to come home unharmed with an injured boy before disappearing back
into the city. The story was never confirmed, and the other guards had shut him
up quickly before questions could be asked.
He
had hoped, for a small moment, and then he’d wondered why he hoped at all. All
he knew of the two brothers were their names. They weren’t close, they had
never been friends. They had never spoken directly to one another. It had
always been him shouting orders and the immigrants blindly obeying.
So
why did he look for Zhang Zitao every time new Chinese immigrants arrived at
the barracks? He was getting soft.
The
track had been repaired. They’d spend a few days on cleanup duty with the new
recruits before they’d sent them out to finish the job that their predecessors
had begun. Once more Wu Fan sat atop his horse with a gun in his hand and no
intention of firing it. Only this time there were no attacks. The Afflicted had
gone back into the forest, probably to feed off of whatever wild game was left.
The
trains would be functional come morning. The station had been overrun that
afternoon with people demanding tickets. Most had been students and professors
at Sunkyungkwan. Those with receipts from their past tickets were able to
redeem them for the first train out that morning.
It
always surprised Wu Fan how foolish people were, to believe that sitting in a
metal box would save them from the Afflicted if they attacked. Well, as long as
the train kept moving they’d be fine, he supposed. He certainly didn’t care. If
they died, they died.
All
Wu Fan needed was himself.
“Son, no one is ever going to do anything
for you that you can’t do for yourself, and they’re going to expect something
out of it. So don’t rely on anyone. Use your own skills and survive because no
one is going to risk their lives for you. Everyone is looking out for
themselves. Don’t forget that.”
Wu
Fan gave a small groan and sat up. There was no point in trying to sleep now. He
tugged on his boots and grabbed his jacket, throwing it over his shoulders as
he opened the door into the pitch black hallway.
No
one else was up so there was no reason for any lamps. He’d fallen asleep with a
gas lamp burning, but it didn’t take long for his eyes to adjust to the new
level of darkness. He walked down the hall and out into the night.
The
stars were out, small pinpricks of white on a black canvas. A soft mewling cut
through the silence and he looked down to see a cat staring up at him, golden
eyes glinting. It began to curl around his legs, still mewling.
“I
don’t have any food.” He replied, feeling foolish for talking to a cat. He
tried to shake it off by nudging it lightly with its boot but that did not
deter it. The cat merely curled itself tighter around his ankles.
“Ramsey’s
dog will kill you if he finds you. He loves chasing cats and ringing their
necks. You had better leave.” He’d seen the dog come bounding up to the foremen
barracks with a kitten in its jaws just the other day.
Now
that he thought about it, this cat looked eerily similar. “Was that your baby?”
He reached down and scratched it behind the ears, feeling the purr travel from
his fingertips up his hand. “You must have been Chinese in a past life. Even
the Korean dogs are trying to kill us.”
The
cat slowly unwound itself from his legs and scampered a few feet away, turning
back to see if he was watching. He raised an eyebrow. “Go on, I’m not going to
follow you.” He didn’t have time for cats. The cat gave one last meow before
slinking off into the darkness.
Haeju
Weekly Press
Sunday,
noon, March 27th, 1858
The
door creaked open and Baekhyun gave a bright smile, “Good morning…oh.” He
blinked, smile falling a bit as the person who entered gave a wolfish grin.
“I’m
sorry I’m not who you were expecting.” Jongdae held out a tray, “But I did
bring food to make up for it.”
“Where’s
Chanyeol?” He tried not to sound too let down. He’d gotten used to Chanyeol
over the week; comfortable with him. Chanyeol was simple, like him. With the
way Kyungsoo and Jongdae dressed, it was easy to tell they were above him even
if they didn’t act it. Chanyeol said that Jongdae was rich but he wasn’t noble
but there was something about him that made Baekhyun uncomfortable. They weren’t
commoners like him, but Chanyeol was.
“He
took the doctor to the train station to see him off. He left for Hanseong
today.”
Left?
But doctor Kyungsoo couldn’t leave, they were going to begin his physical
therapy today! He was supposed to begin walking! What if something went wrong?
“The
doctor checked you over last night and said you looked fine. He taught Chanyeol
the stretches you’re supposed to do,” Jongdae snickered, reading the panic in
his eyes. “You’ve gotten pretty comfortable here.”
Baekhyun
stiffened. It sounded oddly like a threat even though he knew it wasn’t. It was
just…he had a hard time believing any of this had happened. People weren’t nice so how come he was being treated
this way?
Even
those two Chinese had been kind, and he’d done nothing to deserve that.
“They
didn’t have to save me.” I cursed them. I
hated them. Even if they didn’t
understand the words, they should have known how I felt. But the two
Chinese had saved him. The rich doctor had healed him. Jongdae was housing him.
And none of them were demanding payment.
Was he the
only cruel, untrusting person here? He always thought everyone was as bitter as
he was. He wasn’t comfortable with his revelation.
Jongdae
watched him closely, before he gave a laugh, as if reading Baekhyun’s thoughts.
“Oh, you don’t have to worry. Everyone is just as selfish as you are.” He smiled.
“Yixing and Zitao did it to prove a point. That they weren’t like the British.
I’m sure they contemplated abandoning you more than once. Doctor Do wanted to
maintain his image as a selfless, caring doctor. He only did his duty as a
physician. You can be sure if he couldn’t afford to restock his supplies he
would have charged you, kind hearted or no.”
“And you?”
Jongdae
grinned. “I get a story out of all this.” He spread out his hands. “So don’t
worry. We’re all in it for ourselves.”
It was
oddly comforting, his words. It meant he wasn’t the only one looking out for
himself. Everyone was just like he was. He didn’t know if it was the truth or
not, but it helped.
“What about
Chanyeol?” Baekhyun asked, because Jongdae hadn’t mentioned him.
“Chanyeol?
He just loves cleaning chamberpots.” Jongdae teased, and Baekhyun flushed.
Chanyeol had offered to help him when he needed to use the restroom since he
couldn’t get out of bed. It was probably what had brought the two closer
together. Having someone share in something as personal—and mortifying—as relieving
himself certainly strengthened bonds.
Jongdae
stood with a sigh. “Well, I have a paper to edit. Don’t think you’re getting
off the hook, I still have to interview you too.” The door closed behind him
and Baekhyun was left alone again.
He leaned
back against his pillows and looked around the room that had become a second
home to him. His only home now, really. Jongdae had informed him that he couldn’t
just go back and continue living his normal life. If the government of Haeju
found out that he was still alive they would hunt them all down for fear of
infection. It was only through the grace of the cowardice of the gate guards
that they’d survived this long.
There wasn’t
much for him to go back to, he supposed, but he worried about his mother.
Kyungsoo had gone a few days ago to check on her and given her some medicine.
Baekhyun was going to pay him back for it. He’d pay him back for his leg too,
once he got the money.
He didn’t
know how he was going to do it, but he would.
Byun
Baekhyun was indebted to no one.
Hanseong Central
Station, Hanseong
Tuesday,
8:22pm, March 29th, 1858
The train station was busier than
he had expected. He stepped off of the platform into a throng of shouting
bodies. The air felt thicker in Hanseong; dirtier. Perhaps it was because there
was no breeze from the ocean to sweep away the exhaust from smokestacks. It
reminded him of London.
He was beginning to miss Haeju
already. He hadn’t wanted to leave, especially with Baekhyun just beginning to
walk again. But there was nothing he could do. He had a commitment to keep.
Speaking of commitments, a carriage
was supposed to be waiting for him when he arrived. Unfortunately he couldn’t
see over the top hats and plumed bonnets of the crowd so he had no idea if one
was waiting or not.
“Dr. Do! Dr. Do!”
Kyungsoo looked around for the
source of the voice through the chaos. He was shoved from behind and lost his
footing. There was a moment of terrifying realization that he would be trampled
to death, but he was grabbed from behind and righted.
“Keep moving.” A voice murmured in
his ear as he was lead through the crowd by strong hands. He tried to glance
back but as he was jostled all he saw were full lips and a top hat.
By the time they exited the station
Kyungsoo was out of breath and a migraine was forming just behind his eyes. His
rescuer let go of his arm and gave him a long stare. “Shall we get going?”
Kyungsoo frowned. Was this the man
that was supposed to pick him up? No, impossible. This man was too
well-dressed. Well, it wouldn’t do not to introduce himself…Kyungsoo began
searching his pockets for his business card. He glanced up to see the other man
watching him oddly. Maybe they didn’t exchanged business cards in Joseon? He
felt a bit foolish now.
“My carriage is over there.” The
other man motioned down the street.
“Your carriage?” Kyungsoo’s wide eyes
widened even more. Was this man giving him a ride? “Thank you!” It didn’t cross
his mind that the other man could be a serial killer or a mugger. Kyungsoo just
wanted to get to the University and begin preparing for his first lecture.
They settled into the carriage and
Kyungsoo smiled brightly at the other man. “Could you take me to Sunkyungkwan
University, then?”
The other man paused, and his
smooth smile faltered for a moment. If Kyungsoo had been looking closer he
would have seen the disbelief etched on those sultry features, but he was much
too preoccupied with worrying whether his trunk would arrive safely ahead of
him. That was when a low, steady laugh filled the carriage and the man’s
shoulders shook, “Yes.” He finally nodded with a last chuckle. “Of course.”
“Thank you again.” Kyungsoo smiled.
“This is my first time in Hanseong so I wasn’t sure if there would be carriages
for rent like in London.”
“London?”
“Yes.” Kyungsoo nodded amicably. “I
studied medicine there. Oh I haven’t introduced myself. Dr. Do Kyungsoo.” He
held out his hand to shake. There was a brief moment where he wondered if they
shook hands in Joseon to greet one another and was just about to pull back when
the other man leaned forward languidly. His hand was warm as he shook
Kyungsoo’s and he let go with a gentle flick of his wrist. “Kim Jongin, at your
service.”
Jongin. A nice name. “I had not
expected such a warm reception, especially from a stranger. You are very kind.”
Jongin’s smile tilted his full lips
and it was almost mocking. “You give me too much credit, I’m sure.” He leaned
back in his seat and watched Kyungsoo through half-lidded eyes. “If you studied
in London why did you return here?”
“I missed home.” Kyungsoo shifted
his umbrella in his lap.
It was a normal, civil conversation
and it ended as pleasantly and artificial as it began. Soon the carriage slowed
to a stop. “We must have arrived.” Jongin opened the door for Kyungsoo and he
stepped out. He turned to say thank you one last time—and pay for the service—but
the carriage was already lurching forward. He watched it travel down the
street.
Then he gave a small sigh. That had
been quite an odd experience, but a pleasant one.
A man at the gate looked him over.
“Who are you, sir?”
“Dr. Do Kyungsoo.”
“Your trunk arrived just now.” The
man nodded. “Come with me.”
I'm so glad you updated, it's a brilliant story, I love it so much and I can't wait for it to continue.
ReplyDeleteThank you! I am really glad that you're enjoying it. It's hard sometimes to get excited and inspired when there isn't any feedback, but the comments always make it worth it.
DeleteOh gosh, excellent, excellent, excellent! I really can't get enough of this story. The plot is brilliant, and the little "excerpts" in the beginning are always so well done and add so much to the story. I also like the attention paid to each character's thoughts and development. Also, excellent description of Baekhyun's first waking moment! Again, look forward to the next installment!
ReplyDeleteThank you! Baekhyun's part took the longest to write, haha. I was very proud of it I'm so glad someone noticed. I always love it when people pick up on the little parts I work so hard on. Thank you anonymous reader!
DeleteI really can't get over just how much I'm in love with this story. Your attention to detail gives me goosebumps and the development of each character is so beautifully unique. You highlight the good and the bad of the time period and don't glamorize the mess of the class system and it's heart breaking and I love it. Jongin was finally introduced! As a mysterious stranger, no less. I am beyond excited to learn more about him, and of course see more of Kyungsoo, and meet those not yet introduced, and see the others and - and -! I'm getting too excited, I think. Anywho! Thank you for writing, I know it's hard work and takes a lot of time.
ReplyDeleteThank you I am so glad you're enjoying it. Yes, we finally get to meet Jongin! Ah, mysterious Jongin...kekeke.
DeleteMan, I love the way you write. Especially how you characterize people; there is no one completely selfless person and I love love love how you bring that to light. I can tell you put a lot of thought into your characters and your plot. And... now time for the incoherence lmao.
ReplyDeleteI REALLY LOVE KYUNGSOO EVEN IF HE'S NOT COMPLETELY SELFLESS. The fact that he tries and doesn't skimp out where he totally could have, like with all the medicine and treatment he's doing, makes me love him even more.
AND OMG /JONGIN/ HE'S HERE HE'S REAL AND I AM EXCITED.
WHEN I GOT THE EMAIL THAT THIS UPDATED I FREAKED OUT A LITTLE (read: a lot)
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS C:
Haha I am so glad you enjoyed it. Yes, I wanted to focus on the fact that no one is completely selfless but that doesn't necessarily make them bad people, it just makes them human. The different levels of that are what's important. Hopefully the next chapter won't take as long to update. :)
DeleteTHANK YOU FOR UPDATING!
ReplyDeleteI really love the attention to detail, especially the gory extract on Baekhyun's leg /shudders
Your command of language is impeccable! The social commentary is probably what I find most impressive (which is tough because everything about this fic amazes me)! And I love how you gradually introduce the characters and take your time with their development and integration into the plot, because some writers rush the introductions and end up ruining the story in the excitement of incorporating the members.
Congratulations on creating a universe that's more than believable- it's captivating. Keep the amazing writing coming! Thank you for doing the ficdom a great service ^^
Oh thank you! I am so glad you're enjoying it. Yes, taking things slow with the characters is the key--but it is so difficult to do because I have so much in store for everyone, haha.
DeleteI stumbled onto this story through recommendations, and tbh I wasn't all that thrilled to read it (mainly because I had no idea what "steampunk" meant lol) BUT! I am glad I stuck on and continued reading!! This is a very interesting piece of work you wrote.. I like how this story ties in with real events (I'm assuming those short passages before each chapter are non-fiction, but if not, then oh well--it's believeable to me). Also glad you posted a character chart and what each person wears :) I never really liked period stories (...is this even considered one? ;__;) but this is a def exception!! Keep up the good work :D
ReplyDeleteP.S. Sorry, this is written anonymously, too lazy to make an actual acct and sign in and whatnot ._. (maybe I'll do it tomorrow...heh)
P.P.S. Can't wait for the rest of the EXO members to show! I'm curious what the last three members will be like~~
I am so glad you liked it and that you kpe treading even though you didn't know what steampunk was. I don't think it's a very mainstream genre for writing yet, especially not fanfiction. I try and tie in with real events from history. I tweak history a bit when I write the short passages at the beginning of the chapters, I'm glad that they sound believable!
DeleteHahaha, I don't know if this is considered a period story or not. XD Maybe?
I should have the next chapter out in a few days.