Friday, July 26, 2013

Candle to the Devil / Chapter 5

Chapter 5

“My goodness doctor, but you are certainly tempting in that cravat.”
“If you make mention of my cravat and the effects it has on your person once more I shall strangle you with my stethoscope.” He replied, obviously flustered.
I liked it when he did that, when his pale face flushed. Like the man himself, the flush was orderly and procedural  starting at his ears and spreading inward to cover his cheeks and end at the tip of his nose. His lips trembled as he tried to think of something else to say. He busied himself with his medical bag.
I leaned back against the bed and watched. I really did enjoy that cravat, more than I care to say. I love it more when I’m dragging it off his neck with my teeth while he gasps softly, hands clutching my jacket sleeve.
            I know he doesn’t wear it solely for my enjoyment—although I am almost positive he knows the effect it has on me—but to cover the obvious love bites left on his skin. He’s so prim and proper, my doctor. It would be unprofessional for him to show that little bit of reddened skin to the public. Especially if they found out I was the one who gave it to him.
            He’d finished checking his medical bag and turned to me, wide eyes and heart shaped lips. “Stop staring at me like that! It’s unnerving. I have enough to do today without you stripping me with your eyes.”
            “What a pity, and you’d just gotten dressed too.” I replied airily, grabbing for the wine bottle on the bedside table. “Care for a drink before you leave?”
            “It’s six in the morning, at least try and wait until afternoon before you begin drinking. I don’t want to come back here with you smelling like Chardonnay and vomit.”
            “You’ll be coming tonight then?” I hoped I didn’t sound pleased. I hid my smile behind the rim of the wine bottle as I pressed it to my lips and tipped the bottle back. Sometimes he doesn’t return for weeks, too busy with his practice.
            I saw him shoot a sideways glance at the robe slipping off my shoulder before he swallowed and gave a curt not. “If there isn’t a backwash of cases I should be back by seven.” He paused, “…is that alright?”
            “I’ll find time for you.” I purred, leaning forward so that the robe pooled at my waist. “But you’d best hurry back or I won’t be able to stay away from that Chardonnay you mentioned.”
            He rolled his eyes and headed for the door.
            “Doctor.”
            He gave an exasperated sigh. “Oh what now? I need to leave now before I find some excuse to crawl back into bed.”
            I merely pointed, “You’ve forgotten your trousers.”

--From the thrilling New York Times best seller The Doctor and The Deviant, with special film adapted cover art for the early May movie release.

Sungkyunkwan University, Hanseong
Wednesday, 10:00am, March 30th, 1858

Sehun didn’t talk much. At first people had mistaken his silence for haughtiness. The truth was that he had a lisp and it was embarrassing. But over time his silence—brought on by his fear of being teased—morphed into the cold elitism that they’d always assumed. So now when he talked no one mentioned the lisp.
            But that didn’t help his fear of public speaking, especially when he was the student chosen to give the welcoming speech for the 1st year students.
            The ceremony had begun two hours ago and had consisted of an introduction of the professors—some of the professors were absent and an explanation was given that they had arrived the night before and were therefore recovering before classes the next day—and a compilation of rules and regulations as well as a welcoming speech from last year’s valedictorian.
            And now it was Sehun’s turn. He’d been chosen for several reasons, he knew. His father was Lord Oh and that meant it was imperative his son was given special treatment as befit his status. But it was also because Sehun had scored the highest on the entrance exam.
            He remembered standing amidst scattered applause, walking up to the golden filigree inlaid podium and pulling out the sheet of parchment he’d written his speech on. The applause faded awkwardly into silence and he cleared his throat, looking up over the crowd of faces.
            “Sungkyunkwan University was founded in 1304 during the Goryeo Dynasty as a symbol of intellect and the strive for excellence. It was formed to compete against the larger schools of Guozijian. These schools had formerly been renowned for their educational systems, for the upbringing of the nobility to the higher levels of enlightenment needed to properly govern a bright and prosperous nation.
            But China has fallen. It has become a husk of its former glory as the Afflicted ravage the land. Yet Sungkyunkwan has held firm! And whose fault is that? Some would say it is celestial fate.  The gods have chosen Joseon and so Joseon shall prosper.
            But I tell you it is not divine will or intervention. It is superiority. We took what the West gave us and we have made ourselves strong. Joseon shall survive where China shall not. That is the fate of those who do not possess the innate ability to change, endure, and succeed.
            This illustrious university has made its sole purpose the success of its students. Several of our alumni have gone on to study in the West, to become ambassadors, doctors, and teachers. It is true that our history does not span so far back as the illustrious Guozijian and its Taixue predecessors.
            But we have changed. We have endured. And we have succeeded. 
            With the greatness that has been bestowed upon us I hope that we, as the newest members of this university, shall seize upon that greatness and mold it to our will. Thank you.”
He gave a last nod and the majority of the student body got to their feet, clapping. He spotted a few students glancing around nervously—Chinese students most likely. Out of the corner of his eye he saw a small group stand and exit the auditorium.
            He had made enemies today.
            But he had also made his point, even if he had to sink as low as to praise the British to do so.
            He made his way back to his seat with a blank face, nodding at those that shook his hand and tried to greet him. He did not have time for them. He could tell already, these people were not the ones he had spoken of. They were not seizing greatness. They were trying to seize him and his favor.
            But perhaps that was greatness in its own right.



           

Haeju Weekly Press, Haeju
Tuesday, 11:22am, March 29th, 1858

“Aish.” Baekhyun stumbled backwards and pain danced in front of his eyes, small bursts of white light as strong arms held him up from behind.
“It’s alright,” Chanyeol grunted, “Come on, Kyungsoo said that you have to stand. The muscles in your legs are going to weaken even more if you don’t start using them.”
Baekhyun didn’t care if he ever walked again so long as it meant never having to experience this kind of pain. Two days ago they had begun stretches to test out how well his new kneecap responded to his body. He had just gotten used to the constant buzzing sensation beneath his skin and the smell of that disgusting salve.
It hurt to bend his leg at all, and the buzzing only intensified with the movement. Or maybe that was just the pain amplifying everything, he wasn’t sure. His entire body ached from the stretches.
But that had been nothing compared to the feeling of placing his entire weight on his legs. At first he hadn’t felt anything at all. Chanyeol had grabbed him under the arms and eased him to his feet and he’d felt like he was floating on air.
And then his entire body weight slammed down with the force of a smith’s hammer and all he’d seen was white. A jolt of electricity shot up his spine, scalding, blossoming into waves of heat that spread across his back and under his ribcage.
Once he’d regained his ability to breathe he’d turned to the side and vomited.
It was embarrassing, because he’d puked all over Chanyeol’s pants leg and he could still smell it even though he refused to look and he was sure that Chanyeol wanted a bath. But the other man had been more concerned with keeping Baekhyun upright because that was what Kyungsoo had said was best for him.
Kyungsoo could have told him drinking sewage was good for him and he’d do it, Baekhyun was certain. Not that Baekhyun gave a damn what Kyungsoo ordered Chanyeol to do and what he complied with, as long as it didn’t involve him. This did, however.
“Just a little longer. Ease your weight onto your left leg.”
Baekhyun let out a grunt and did as he was told. Sweet relief, the feeling of a stable, human leg. He closed his eyes and tried to ignore the throbbing that still presented itself with each rapid heartbeat.
“Now the right.”
No. No no no not the right, please no. Baekhyun took a deep breath and slowly braced himself.
The pain came quickly enough. His knee buckled—he almost heard the screech of metal—and for a moment he was surprised at how well the metal knee acted like his natural one—but then he was on the ground with Chanyeol sprawled atop him, elbow digging into his stomach.
“Sorry—aish are you ok?” Chanyeol was blubbering something but Baekhyun hardly heard it. It sounded like someone had stuffed cotton in his ears. Or maybe he was underwater and drowning. He flailed, trying to reach the surface. He broke free and—
“—oh god it’s bleeding it wasn’t supposed to start bleeding did I rip something? Hey, hey are you ok?” Chanyeol was shouting, the sound amplified by pain. His leg was wet. He gave a loud groan and sat up. There was a small dot of blood on his pants leg, probably just from the fall.
He found himself staring at the seat of his pants and the stain slowly creeping its way down his thigh. His face burned. He tried to stand but it hurt too much and he landed hard on his back.
“Hey, hey be careful—”
“Don’t touch me!” Baekhyun snapped, throwing off the helping hand.
Chanyeol blinked. He was still smiling that annoyingly garish grin of his but it looked strained, and his eyes were lost, like a puppy that had just brought its master a torn up shoe and didn’t understand what he’d done wrong.
He gave a little nod, “Ok. Maybe we should stop here for today. I have to finish up some errands for Jongdae.” He made to pick up Baekhyun to put him back on the bed but the other man threw him off again.
“I’m fine. I can make it to the bed!” Baekhyun ground out, “You’re not my nurse.”
Chanyeol gave another nod, looking lost, before the door closed and Baekhyun was left alone.
            This wasn’t working. How was he going to learn to walk again if he couldn’t even stand? No matter what Jongdae had said about getting a story out of him or the doctor waving off the medical bills it was only a matter of time before they decided to call upon him for what he owed them. He needed a job before they threw him into debtor’s prison.

Haeju Market Street
Tuesday, 1:34pm, March 29th, 1858

            He needed more shoe polish.
            If Wu Fan had been more adventurous he would have asked one of the other foremen if there was any in the company reserves. The other foremen often took anything extra they could find. No one missed a bottle of shaving cream or a matchbox. But Wu Fan disliked asking for favors and he wasn’t welcome to them anyway.
            Besides, his favorite polish was sold by Mrs. Han, a Chinese immigrant who had come to Haeju six years ago with nothing but a recipe for dumplings and four li. She ran a small dumpling restaurant on market street, with a general store attached that was run by her son Geng.
            He liked the smell of the shop. The Chinese incense mixed with the dumplings and it was a comforting reminder of the home he no longer had. Mrs. Han was in the side room of the store, kneading dough when he entered. She glanced at him and gave a bright smile and called to him in Ji Lu mandarin, “Wu Fan! Is it your day off? What can I get you?”
            “Where is your son, auntie?” He glanced around the store and noticed that there was no one there.
            Mrs. Han gave a long suffering sigh. “He’s off somewhere.” She leaned forward conspiratorially. “He’s been frequenting a gisaeng house down the way. I think he’s fallen in love with one of their haengsu.”
            That was surprising. Geng was a very level headed man and he wouldn’t waste the family’s small income on entertainment even if their store was seeing good business. Not only that, but a haengsu?
            Mrs. Han was shaking her head. “We don’t have time for it, or the coin. It doesn’t matter if she’s willing to see him or not we can’t afford it. And she’s only a gisaeng.” He knew Mrs. Han thought gisaeng below her, even if she was only a simple shopkeeper. She’d told him once that before she and her son had come to Haeju that they’d been nobility. He had a feeling that her family had probably been of a rich merchant class that had bought that nobility, judging from her tact with finances but he wouldn’t say so. She might raise the price of shoe polish just to spite him.
            He’d visited Haeju’s main gisaeng house on more than one occasion. He was a bit of a novelty to them, a Chinaman working for the British. And he was tall and had a handsome face, which made him sought after when he went. But he’d never been invited by any of the haengsu. They entertained yangban and only upon their own invitation.
            “Auntie let me get that for you,” He noticed her struggling with the large bowl filled with freshly made buckwheat noodles. She protested but he ignored her. She was his only friend in this god forsaken country, he would help her whether she wanted him to or not. Besides, he knew she secretly liked being pampered by handsome men. “Do you know the haengsu’s name?”
She frowned again. “No, no, I saw her once, walking down the street. Well, not walking. She was in a litter. The haengsu don’t walk on their own. But you should have seen Geng’s face.” She sighed again, sounding weary. “I know that look.” She grabbed a tin of shoe polish from the shelves behind her and placed it on the counter. “She was pretty, in a cold way. Strong features, haughty eyes. She won’t spare my boy a glance so I don’t have to worry I suppose. He’ll come back feeling heartbroken soon enough.”
Wu Fan gave a small smile before placing the coins on the table. “Here’s for the polish, auntie.”
She waved him off. “No, no, you helped me with the noodles. And I know you’re working too hard. I heard about the attack on the railroad.”
Wu Fan stiffened.
She reached over the counter and patted his cheek with a flour covered hand. “You are doing your best to live in this world. That is all any of us can do.”
No. No he hadn’t done his best. He’d done as little as was needed. He remained silent. “Keep the coins, auntie.” He walked out of the store with is polish before she could protest.  
            As he stepped out onto the street he found it more crowded then when he’d stepped inside. He politely pushed his way into the crowd and began the trek back to the railroad company. Perhaps he’d grab some ddeokbokki before he headed back.
            He was headed to the nearest ddeokbokki stall when he spotted them. It was easy, because two of them were as tall as he was. The first he saw he didn’t recognize, but he felt like he’d seen him somewhere before. He was motioning to the other two, pointing and making hand gestures to explain himself.
            The other two he knew immediately. Zhang Yixing and his younger brother Zitao.
            They were not meant to be here. They were not supposed to be alive. How on earth had they gotten out of the Deadlands? He ducked into the nearest alleyway and waited as they passed by, speaking in a mix of butchered Korean and Mandarin. The language barrier between the two brothers and their companion was obvious, but they looked content enough, carrying packages as he pointed out sights.
            How…this wasn’t possible.

House of Lords, Hanseong
Tuesday, 3:02pm, March 29th, 1858

“Lord Great Chamberlain, you’ve come as well?”
Joonmyun turned at the voice and gave a small smile and a bow. “Yes, good day Lord Kim.” His smile faltered slightly as he noticed the Cabinet Secretary’s attire. He was dressed in the traditional red dalryeongpo, befitting his rank in court. His hyungbae showed both the civil officer’s symbol of the crane and the hopyo that signified military officers. Around his waist was a mother-of-pearl inlaid gadkae.
Was he mad? Everyone knew that to meet the British ambassador in Korean clothing was a slap in the face. He looked down at his own greatcoat and carefully polished boots and kid leather gloves.
Lord Kim caught his eye and gave a baleful smile. “I am not ashamed of my country, Lord Great Chamberlain.”
Joonmyun’s throat tightened. The Cabinet Secretary had made his opinions on the growing British influence in court obvious. Everyone knew he sided with Joseon’s king in all things. He was often called the King’s dog by those who disliked him. Whether he took pride in the name Joonmyun could not guess.
But this was a bold move even for a man in such a position as the Cabinet Secretary. Joseon’s king would be hard pressed to resolve the issue if Lord Kim offended Lord Bruce upon his arrival.
Joonmyun forced a smile upon his own face. He’d carefully crafted this smile, the one he had to use when he felt like screaming or crying or laughing. It was icy in its politeness. “Neither am I, Lord Kim. Did you ever doubt my loyalties to the crown?”
“Oh no,” Lord Kim replied smoothly, his smile still friendly as he inspected his sleeves. “…the British one, at least. I know how strong those loyalties are.” He added as an afterthought, so softly that only Joonmyun heard, not the lower ranked officers that had come with them to greet the ambassador.
Joonmyun flinched, but kept his smile in place. “I do what is best for my country.”
“I suppose we shall discover the truth behind those words soon enough.” Lord Kim continued amiably.
The lower officers had caught sight of Lord Kim’s attire and edged away from him, afraid to be associated with the man so deliberately calling attention to himself. Joonmyun thought them ridiculous. They all looked the perfect example of British nobility in their waistcoats and top hats. There was no way anyone would associate the two. He didn’t move from his place beside Lord Kim, although his hand tightened around his walking cane.
The sound of a bleating horn caught their attention and stopped the dangerous conversation before it began in earnest. The automobile carrying Lord Bruce was one of five in Hanseong and one of nine in all of Joseon. If Joonmyun remembered, this was the personal vehicle of the Lord High Chancellor. Joonmyun’s own sat in the garage attached to his manor house. He’d had no need to flaunt it around town. Besides, the fumes were noxious.
He was not surprised that the Lord High Chancellor had offered to use his own to pick up Lord Bruce from the hotel. It did irk him slightly, however. He had been in charge of Lord Bruce’s comfort during his stay in Hanseong. He had done everything in his power to keep the entire ordeal orderly and clean.
He hoped, at the very least, that Lord Bruce had stayed at the hotel suite he had reserved for him.
The vehicle pulled to a stop in front of the steps, a few yards from where the men stood. A driver opened his door and hurried around to the back. He was European, with blonde hair. His eyes were hidden behind a pair of goggles to keep the dust from his eyes.
Two men appeared out of the back seat. Lord Oh was easily recognizable. The second was Lord Bruce. He was a tall man, with a bushy beard the color of rust and a matching handlebar mustache  both peppered with gray. The lines around his mouth and eyes showed he laughed often. He had been fit once, board-shouldered and muscled, but in his later years he’d acquired a bit of a stomach and a second chin mostly hidden behind his beard.
Joonmyun and Lord Kim bowed as he stepped forward, and the lesser officers behind them hurried to do the same. Joonmyun straightened and caught Lord Oh’s gaze. The other man was smiling readily, a smug smile that Joonmyun disliked. He wanted to ask him why he’d decided to interfere with Joonmyun’s duties but he would not do so in front of Lord Bruce and others of the House of Lords. That would have been disrespectful to someone older than himself and so he held his tongue on the matter.
Lord Oh noticed Lord Kim and laughed brightly, “My, my,  but you certainly do stand out.”
Lord Kim gave another nod toward Lord Bruce, ignoring Lord Oh who had voiced the comment. “I know how interested Lord Bruce was in the traditions of Joseon’s court on his first visit to our capital.”
Lord Bruce’s eyes lit up. “Yes, yes I remember now. Is this the outfit you mentioned?”
“Yes sir.” Lord Kim continued smoothly, and Joonmyun didn’t fail to notice the tightness of Lord Oh’s jaw as he began to grind his teeth.
Lord Bruce laughed, “The color is quite noticeable, isn’t it? You’re Lord Kim aren’t you?”
The Cabinet Secretary gave a nod. “Yes, Lord Bruce. I am his majesty of Joseon’s Cabinet Secretary. I am pleased you remember.” He motioned toward Joonmyun. “This is Lord Kim, the Lord Great Chamberlain.”
Lord Bruce grabbed Joonmyun’s hand in his larger one and gave it a brisk shake. “Another Kim?”
“There is no relation sir.” Lord Kim nodded again. “He inherited the position this year after his father’s death.”
“I see, I see.” Lord Bruce nodded. “You were in charge of my lodgings, were you not?”
“I was, Lord Bruce.” Joonmyun felt a tingling at the back of his neck. Had something gone amiss?
“What a marvelous place. What is the hotel called?”
“The Palace of Pearls, Lord Bruce.”
“The food served was fantastic.” Lord Bruce praised. “You chose well.”
Joonmyun hadn’t realized he’d been holding his breath until he released it and felt winded. He gave a gracious smile and another nod of thanks. “I am glad you are enjoying your stay. If you have an request do not hesitate to tell me.”
“Shall we take a tour of the House of Lords now, Lord Bruce…” Lord Oh tried to steer the other man toward the steps, glaring icy daggers at Lord Kim.
Lord Bruce’s smile fell and he turned toward Lord Oh with a harsh look of his own. “The last time I was in Hanseong I mentioned an interest to you as well, Lord Oh, but when I arrived at the train station I found myself bereft of my curiosity. Perhaps you would do well to remember that.” He walked briskly up the stairs, the lower rank officers scrambling out of his way.
Lord Oh stiffened, before he stalked after the other man.
Joonmyun glanced at Lord Kim. The other man was still smiling. “It seems as if Lord Oh is losing favor. How unfortunate.”
As Lord Kim walked ahead of him up the steps, Joonmyun was left to wonder if Lord Kim had anything to do with the incident. Perhaps he should have taken Lord Kim’s nickname more seriously.
Dogs were frightening creatures when backed into a corner.


Sungkyunkwan University, Hanseong
Wednesday, 9:00am, March 30th, 1858

Kyungsoo cleared his throat and shifted the large box in his arms. He looked down at his watch and tried to drown out the thrum of conversation on the other side of the door. Someone bumped into him, telling him to move out of the way as they walked inside.
Kyungsoo blinked and took a few steps back. He was the same age as half of these students—and younger than some—and the only reason he was the one standing in front of them lecturing was because he’d spent his entire educational life in British boarding schools and universities. If any of these students had been given the same opportunity they’d be doing the same thing—and probably doing it better.
He suddenly felt ten times more insignificant and a million times more nervous than he had two minutes ago. He also realized that he needed to prove himself. He took one last, deep breath and braced his shoulder on the door, pushing it open as he went.
The lecture hall was designed like a proscenium, with a large space at the front of the room and chairs that surrounded it in lines that rose upwards in the back. It was monstrously large and filled to the brim with students. He glanced briefly at the top tier, which he noticed was occupied by the older students, judging by the badges on their jackets. Then he looked to the podium and small table in the central space at the bottom, a few yards from the door where he stood.
This was not designed to be a medical lecture hall but it was the only one large enough for the majority of the student body. He began wondering how he would go about this lecture without the proper space and tools. Perhaps he could have a second table brought in?
No one paid him any attention as he walked up to the podium. The box in his arms was heavy and that, coupled with the complete disregard they were showing him, irritated him. He glanced around one last time before he let the box fall onto the small table with a loud bang.
The classroom went silent as all heads turned to the podium and therefore Kyungsoo. Kyungsoo had given presentations in front of entire lecture halls full of British scholars that thought he was an inferior human being. That made this a bit easier to handle. But what if they thought his knowledge was lacking? If he messed up they’d say he was a failure and that he should have given this chance of a British education to someone else.
He cleared his throat and tried to look less terrified than he felt. He knew his big eyes didn’t help. “Good morning. I am Dr. Do Kyungsoo, your professor for this lecture.”
No one looked like they believed him. He didn’t blame them. He busied himself with emptying the box to keep from looking at them. “I had the honor of riding the train here from Haeju. I recognize several of you from the ride.” He paused and glanced up, watching several people shift in their chairs. “I also overheard several of you complaining about having to take this mandatory lecture course.”
 Some of the students exchanged glances, now worried. What else had he heard on that train? They hadn’t suspected him because he hardly looked like a professor. He could see them mentally retracing their steps and trying to recall their conversations on board. He continued talking, walking to the front of the table.
“I cannot promise you that this will be interesting. Very few of you will find medical biomechanics half as fascinating as I do.” He heard a low exhalation of breath as most of the students tried to suppress groans. He ignored it, “But I can promise that it will be informative. And that is why you came to Sungkyunkwan, isn’t it? To become informed, intelligent individuals.”
He caught the eyes of a few students. The ones in the front few rows—first years—straightened in their seats. This was a good sign, at least. “I can see that some of you are older students. I hope that you will understand that I will be teaching this course under the assumption that you have no prior medical knowledge. I’ll apologize to the medical students now.”
There was a ripple of laughter that went through the lecture hall and he picked out the medical students and filed away the information for later. He clapped his hands together, glanced down at his pocket watch and noted the time, before he began the lecture in earnest.
“Long ago, there was a belief that base metals could be combined with heat and magic to create the most valuable thing in existence. Eternal life. This was the field of alchemy and alchemists lived and died striving to discover these secrets.
45 years ago, a doctor discovered that metal and heat could be combined to create just that. There was no elixir of life, but doctors discovered something else. The ability to give life back to those that had lost a part of it. An arm, a leg, even a lung. A mechanized lung.
We did not combine metal and heat and magic. We combined metal and circuitry and science. This, coupled with medical knowledge, has created the revolutionary process that has saved our dwindling populations in the throes of a deadly virus.
We can bring back what was lost. In a way, current doctors have become the alchemists of old. We cannot make people immortal, but we can do the next best thing. We can prolong the life you have.”
He paused for a moment and glanced around the lecture hall. They were all hanging on his words, waiting for what was to come next. He’d worked on this little opening speech for two weeks, and it was certainly fulfilling its purpose.
“So perhaps medical biomechanics does not interest you. But I am sure that if you were to lose a limb right now, you would thank your God that there are those that are interested. Because the skill to attach circuitry and gears to nerves and bone is not easily developed.
My lectures will focus on the process of biomechanics in attaching artificial limbs. Anything beyond that will be far too advanced for the non-medical students here. I will touch on the very basic concepts of nerve circuitry. Assignments will be given every two weeks and will consist of written responses to questions I will give during lecture. I suggest taking extensive notes.”
Some of the students weren’t pleased with this. They exchanged glances, looks that told him they thought this lecture was a waste of their time. They weren’t all medical students after all.
But even the most basic of knowledge could save a life, and that was Kyungsoo’s purpose. To save lives, even if he wasn’t physically operating on them.
“Surgeons were once called glorified butchers. They killed more than they saved. Alchemists fed their clients quicksilver and unknown concoctions and drove them mad. Somehow we have learned to combine aspects of the past with the innovations of the present to create a field of study that can truly be called medicine.
But before we can understand how this new technology works, you must understand the body in its basic form.” He grabbed a roll of paper from his box and unraveled it to reveal a detailed sketch of the human body.
“We will begin with the skeletal system.”


[A/N: I realized that I use a bit of vocabulary that you might not be familiar with, so I decided that if there is anything I think might need explanation I will add it into a footnote section at the bottom of each chapter. If there is anything I forgot to place here that you need explained feel free to ask me.]
Footnotes:
Dalryeongpo: the traditional court attire for court officials. The color denotes rank. Red is for 1st senior to 3rd senior rank. Blue for 3rd junior to 6th junior rank. Green for 7th junior to 9th junior rank.

Hyungbae: a rank badge made up of embroidered cloud patterns and animals. Hyungbae with two animals are reserved for 1st to 3rd rank.

Gakdae: a belt typically worn by royalty. Can also refer to a simple sash.



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12 comments:

  1. Wow, I just happened to check back on this story today, and you've already updated! Yay!

    Boy, was I impressed by the scene with Junmyeon and the three Lords. Great job describing the really tense, icy atmosphere. It actually got a little bit of adrenaline running while I was reading that whole scene. And I'm so proud of Kyungsoo! What a fighter. Plus, you captured the feeling of a lecture setting perfectly. I felt like I was in class again! And then there are Kris and Sehun, whom I feel so ambivalent about. On the one hand, I feel disgusted by their actions and their pride, and on the other I recognize and empathize with their weaknesses. Which reminds me, you do such an amazing job with displaying the human aspect of everyone, if you understand what I mean. Most fanfiction, even lengthy ones, don't even come close to how utterly real and human they make their characters as you do, regardless of fandom. Generally I feel that they get too one-dimensional or stuck in a certain generic personality, but I can really feel (or imagine) the complexities behind Exo's characters here.

    Lastly, Baekhyun is my bias, so I have to comment on his scene! Ooooooh, I am so happy about it!!! I am utterly ecstatic over your description of his recovery process, especially since you don't sugarcoat any of his harsh feelings or pain.

    Same as always, looking forward to the next one!

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    1. Thank you so much. Haha, if you ask any of my friends they'll tell you that I complain a LOT about how unrealistic people make their characters in shows and stories so I try very hard to make mine as realistic as I can get them, and I am glad that it is working. :)

      Ah Baekhyun, that wonderful boy. :D I like to show the change as slow because no one is going to accept everything overnight. He isn't going to take what everyone told him at face value and accept all of it as an unconditional act of kindness. He's one of my favorite characters to write, quite honestly.

      Oh Sehun...that boy. Now that Kyungsoo as at school we'll be seeing more of him, so that's a plus but yes, the boy is very, very proud.

      Joonmyun's seen was my favorite one to write in this chapter.

      Once again, I am so glad you're enjoying the story. Thank you for reading.

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  2. I'm so happy you updated. You were right, it came a lot quicker than I was expecting. I commented on your last chapter, and I was nervous but I hope I managed to convey the love I have for this story. It's incredibly detailed and well put together. I'd have to say it's definitely one of the best I've read - and most original.

    My family has a big background in medicine, so I appreciate the realistic way you've put Baekhyun through his recovery and the way you describe his thought processes.

    Tao is my bias, and I'm excited for any upcoming meetings with Kris. I think the relationship dynamics between him, Lay and Tao will be very interesting, as they are bound by a shared culture, but separated by social status and outlook on the world.

    I hope you enjoy writing it as much as everyone enjoys reading it! Thank you so much for sharing, I can't wait for the next chapter.

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    1. Thank you! Yes, I enjoy writing it so very much I'm glad you you enjoy reading it. Oh yes, the dynamics between Tao, Kris, and Lay are wonderful and I can't wait to write more of their interactions.

      Ooo, medical background? That's very cool. I've had to do a lot of research on Victoria-era medicine and modern medicine because I want to make it as realistic as possible so I'm glad that it's working. I hope you won't fault me for any mistakes in the future! XD

      The more people comment the more inspired I am to write. I think that's why the last chapter was updated so quickly. I hope it won't take that long for the next chapter either.

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    2. I'd never fault you for any mistakes! All your stuff so far has been spot on anyway :P Besides, I know much more about cardio stuff than orthopedics, so you're probably far more accurate than I. You always know a writer is talented and dedicated when they actually take the time to research the topics they're writing about - I really love that quality in your writing. It makes me happy that you enjoy writing it; I think your dedication also shows through.

      Thank you so much for writing this, it is definitely my favourite fic out there!

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    3. Oh thank you! I will try hard to continue to impress and entertain.

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  3. Honestly, I cannot tell you how much I love your story. While I do enjoy other, more generic and shallow fics, yours is truly literature. I love how you don't push relationships to start and progress faster than what is realistic. Kyungsoo's my bias and I just. aslkfdjgk every time he shows up. I really liked how you showed his nervousness and how he gradually gained more confidence. And another asdfghjkl; to the excerpt at the opening (because is that kaisoo I spy ヽ(*⌒∇⌒*)ノ )

    And oooh... Joonmyun's scene was also a favorite this time round. This line in particular: "Lord Bruce grabbed Joonmyun’s hand in his larger one and gave it a brisk shake. “Another Kim?” " really caught my eye because it shows how little the British know, so props to you! You really have a way with words.

    Chanyeol's unfaltering faith in Kyungsoo omg their friendship makes my heart so happy I cannot even begin.

    (Sorry for the ineloquence, I have a lot of ~feelings~ haha /showers you with affection)

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    1. Ah thank you! I am so happy that you like the story. Kyungsoo...I am quite partial to the boy. It's so hard sometimes to decide who is my favorite character to write but I enjoy his a lot. Joonmyun's scene was my favorite of this chapter though. Yes, the British are so very ignorant of the places they think they've conquered...XD

      Literature? *blushes* thank you so much! I understand about the generic and shallow fics though, those are needed sometimes. :D

      KaiSoo? >.> <.< maaaaaybe

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  4. Oh man, its near one in the morning and I don't think I'm coherent enough to comment, but your writing is /fantastic/. Your worldbuilding is amazing and detailed- everything slides neatly into place and it feels so very /real/. Characterization makes me want to swoon, they all have distinct goals/desires/driving forces, and again, they feel like real people. In all honesty, this is one of the best fics I have ever read- the plot is very interesting and the characters are gold. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter(as well as for Bluff, which is perfection too, b/c /mafia/!au and /Tao/, just aaahhhh-)!! (uh oops sorry this is basically a fangirling comment, next time I will have more substance ; w ; )

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    1. Hahaha I love fangirling comments! :D Well, I love all kinds of comments...>.>

      I am so happy that you love this world that I've created. I've been trying to build it into something believable, as well as the characters.

      Hehehe hopefully the next chapter will be out soon (for either this or Bluff, depending on where my inspiration takes me I suppose, haha)

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  5. I had started reading your story from the first chapter but lost it for a while, so I was excited when I read 'Bluff" and was directed to this T^T

    As I am Taoris biased, I cannot wait to see how things unfold between the two; there is so much tension between them.
    My other favorite character is Jongdae, that man is a realist from head to toe. He does not sugarcoat things, he does not dwell on the past or future. He focuses on the NOW and is somehow the character who exudes positivity the most, whether it be in good times or bad times. I can go on and on about his character so I'll stop here hehe

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    1. Thank you so much! Jongdae is a pleasure to write for those very reasons! And the TaoRis in the future is going to be so very wonderful. :D Their development will take quite a while.

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